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Andrew Smith's avatar

I kind of like the idea of skipping ahead (like with option 3), but then circling back to Miranda's hell week. Could be a pretty good way to jump in and incite the reader to ask: "how the hell did she get herself here?!?" Then you can just explain exactly that.

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Hannah Acord's avatar

Skip straight to the launch of the second ship, a year after the first left and another characters perspective. I can't wait to read more !!

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