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Wonderful start!

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Much thanks! I appreciate the feedback, I love seeing comments. The first part dropped yesterday, there is an ongoing poll for 6 more days if you would like to be part of where the story goes :)

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Yeah, I think it'll be fun. I thought about the poll thing in the future of when I get more followers. I thought it would help if I ever got in a bind of where the story should go due to writers block.

Dixie will come about soon. I'll post it in my Sunday drops as it'll be a separate run of its own.

This Sunday drop is kind of the beginning of the story of how Dixie came about. It mentions nothing about Dixie, but when one has a lot of downtime, thr mind tends to wander.

Back to the poll thing, I think that was a super neat idea. I'll have to take a gander at it again. Thank you. 🙂🙂🙂

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It's definitely very fun. I enjoy engaging with the audience and letting them direct the story.

I just moved to the poll with my most recent post because I wasn't having much success with the comment section.

Excited to see where you take your publication!

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I will learn so much through those who choose to share their knowledge and experience such as yourself. Thank you!!!!!

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I think you should continue with same night. Build it up to a point but leave it hanging, mystery. Build tension over and over.

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Jump into what happens in the night

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That makes 2 votes for what happens after the prologue!

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Jump right into what happens the night the prologue takes place.

This is really cool!!!

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Seems like we have competition now between choices now. Thank you, I'm glad you think so!

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Jump to the perspective of one of the dark entities in the dreams to foreshadow events.

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Interesting choice, a more sinister start to the story. I like!

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