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Hannah Acord's avatar

Immediately continue story after Frode wakes up from being knocked out. I think this will be an amazing next chapter! I'm extremely excited to read more!

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Jeff Kinnard's avatar

Right into it! We will see which choice wins, Frode's perspective or an unknown soldier.

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Amy's avatar

This is so gripping! I am totally lost in this story and want more....NOW!!!!

I vote for the last option to know from one of the other soldiers that attacked and killed everyone except Frode. I love to hear each side of the story.

Realy love this and can't wait for more! Get writing! Your subscriber is anxiously awaiting!

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Jeff Kinnard's avatar

I must say, I thought that would be the least likely to be picked 😅 definitely will give an interesting perspective in the story.

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Unfortunately it will be another 3 weeks before the next part releases.

The silver lining is that a new character sheet on Frode will be coming out on Tuesday, I hope you enjoy!

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Amy's avatar

I just want more!!!

When you do Frode's character sheet can you put the pronunciation in there? It frustrates me when I can't say the name in my head. Is it "Fr-oh-d" or "Frod-ee" or "Fr-ah- d"? Sometime else? TIA

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Jeff Kinnard's avatar

I will make sure to do that! I also mentioned it in the details section after the prologues end. It is pronounced (Froe - deh) 😁

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Amy's avatar

Now I see it! Thanks for redirecting me! I only read it twice. LOL

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John kinnard's avatar

Great beginning. I would like the story to continue after Frode being knocked out.

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